Haiku and the Pictograph in EL, "on the snow" - February 2007 -

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This is an EL (Earth Language) experimental page to enjoy
the image of a haiku/short poem originally in English/Japanese.
When you can't see the Japanese parts, please don't mind and just skip those parts.

Recently I'm also falling into writing haiku. Being still a beginner,
I started to feel like I had a long way to go. A haiku magazine "Gin-yu" is going to take
some of my haiku, the editor, Natsuishi, told me, although I've never seen the magazine yet.
Then I looked around some back number samples through the Internet;
and found this charming haiku in issue 30 (April, 2006).

This original Japanese haiku was written by Tsengeg, when she was a student
learning Japanese at Soyol Eredem University in Ulaanbaatar, Mongolia.
According to the chancellor of the university, Mongolia has about 2.5 million people
in an area four times larger than Japan; and the winter temperature there is sometimes
below -30 degrees centigrade. Tsengeg tried to write her inmost person's name
in the middle of the endless white plain. The letters must soon be covered by new snow.
But therefore the letters look fresher as if the sound of the name goes off to the world.
In the pictograph, the character next to the indicator of "your name" turns into "smile."

どんどん深まるのでしょうね。雑誌『吟遊』 を私はまだ見たことがないのですが、
そこでウェブサイトの 「吟遊俳句ギャラリー推薦俳句1 ( 夏石番矢選)


The original Japanese by Tsengeg:

The English translation:
I tried
to write his name
on the snow

The EL translation:

The symbols in the pictograph:
: snow (雪), : smile
{ bracket for classification, you}:
to show the following characters are for "your name" (次が「あなたの名前」と示す記号)

The symbols in the EL translation:
{ d-verb mark, for the past tense} (過去動詞符)
{15recognition,21}: try/trial, try (v. with gd)(試み)
: tried something shown after (〜してみた)
EL sometimes makes a sentence without the subject similarly to Japanese;
this translation follows to the original Japanese, omitting the subject "I."
: to show that the following character or phrase is an accusative case of a d-verb (続く文字がD動詞の対格と示す)
{ {any language, shape}: visual symbols/notations, go}: writing, write (v, with gd)(書)
(preposition mark): to show the following character(s) modifies the front words (前置符)
{20out/male, to show pronouns}: he, his, him; here means "his" modifying the following noun: name. (彼の)
{ {recognition, abstract thing}: language, }: name (名前)
{ preposition,{ upper, surface} the upper surface}: on (the upper surface of) (〜の上面の(に)
{ { nature,water}: rain, solid}: snow (雪)

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